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Thursday 24 October 2013

My Narrative Story.



Long ago in the mists of time there lived a little boy named Vinnie. He started a new school where his brother Maxwell went to.

They played with each other then one day a bully came up to them and took their lunch.They were so heartbroken that they did not have anything to eat so they went and told the teacher.So after school they walked home.
While they were walking home the exact same bully came up to them and said,”Why did you tell on the teacher”,they quickly replied “Because you took our lunch”.

Then they ran home crying to their parents but when they got there, their parents were not there. They looked everywhere but the problem was that wherever they go the bully follows them. They were so scared that they ran as fast as they could.They ran to the next door neighbour.

They shouted “HELP HELP HELP WE CAN'T FIND OUR PARENTS”.They quickly replied “Relax Relax they just went to the supermarket to do some shopping you can wait here if you want to”.They made s'mores and some hot chocolate and when their parents arrived they ran quickly and hugged them.

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